The Apple Company has revolutionized the way we listen to music, by replacing a portable audio player and turning it into digital music, which today is known as an iPod. Not only did iPod popularize and regularly purchased in the United States but also around the world. From 2001, the Apple Company has developed a new and more advance kind of iPod to fit the desires of their consumers. This paper discuss the history, the influence, the significance, and the function and different models of an iPod.
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Hi Sandy,
I like the style of your blog. Glad you are having some fun with it!
You only had to post your thesis statement though-- not the whole opening paragraph. I really like the structure that is developing in your thesis statement-- as a reader, I expect to see each one of those topics as a paragraph in the body of the paper. Pay attention to the comma rules we will go over in class today. Also, get ride of the 1st person 'we' in your paragraph-- rewrite those sentences.
Best,
-Kristine
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